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Term 1 Writing

Coming up By David Hill


WALT Identify writing processes that are appropriate for that purpose

My name is Jack and I am going to tell you about a tragic accident that happened two weeks ago.
I was on the farm collecting the hay and loading the truck up when I realised that I had two hours to fill it up.

So I hurried up.

About an hour later I was in my truck driving across the bushy countryside. I  was driving along in my battered truck to deliver the hay. I had to cross an extremely fragile rickety bridge to get there. I was very nervous about that. But there was no going back now. I started to go across the bridge. I was about half way across the bridge when I heard a horrible crack and I knew the bridge had broken. The truck tilted horribly and it fell through the bridge. It hit the water with a horrifying KA-BLAM! It went under the water. (I can still remember smashing into the water.)  This is the end I thought. Or is it. Then I saw a boy about ten trying to smash the glass. I blacked out.

When I woke up I was on a beach coughing and spluttering with the boy about ten getting interviewed. Then a nurse put me on a stretcher and took me to hospital. I woke up about 12:45 and I went back to the farm.

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The next day I was loading up a rented truck with about ½ the hay just to make sure. I wouldn’t have another accident.(obviously I did)(because of the giant hole in the bridge)

Term 1 2017 Goal Review Student

Term 1 2017 Goal Review and Next Steps
Name:
Parent Goal(s)
Strategies I can use are:
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
Social →   recognising the signs when people have had enough
Learning→ enjoy it!


I can look at their expression and see if they’ve had enough.
Contribute all the time and be helpful.






Student Goal(s)
Strategies I can use are:
Review
Eg What strategies have you used to improve? Have you made progress? How do you know?
Next Step
Eg My next step is……...
My goal is to improve my handwriting and perfect my linking.

To use punctuation correctly to enhance my work.






Writing the writing slower or practice and for punctuation
Check with another person and see if they think anything is wrong

My next step is my letter formations and punctuation

Multicultural Week

I was involved in a range of learning experiences for multicultural week

I learnt that you could fit Israel in the South Island.

I enjoyed trying out the chopsticks.

I was most fascinated by a building in Russia that took nothing to keep it together and it has stood for centuries.


A question I have is in Russia what would happen if you had a hot drink outside when it was
minus 50 degrees celsius?

CARE Values

I know how to show my care values in the classroom I think we have the CARE values at Oaklands because if we don't have the CARE values what would keep the students in line?
I think the most important CARE value is Excellence. Here is a picture of me showing that value

Dream Big

WALT describe ideas about the school design

The school idea I am presenting is Chromebooks attached to tables

I am presenting this by making a model

I think that the school should use this idea because it would make less injuries and save money.